Logjams

mimi has finally had a breakthrough of sorts. I had to go all low-tech, printing out a calendar, but I can see holes in ye troublesome mauscript and now have some inkling of what to do with them!

See, this is the trouble with a NaNo book. You get so busy lunging from beginning to end, you don’t see the pitfalls because you skip right over them. I’ve set a book in the fall and given my heroine an October birthday, and yet her birthday doesn’t get a single mention aside from the sentence where she mentions that she was born during the World Series. And since this is a book about a woman recovering her identity, she’d probably have issues with being alone and divorced on her birthday. Hmm. There’s a scene or two right there.

Cardboard foil character needs some work as well. She’s basically a cutout evil blonde right this minute. Hero’s impossibly heroic, too. Need to bang him up a bit as well. Good. Torture I can manage. Finally, finally I get some movement.

Too bad the novel squirrels are playing hell with my sleep schedule. Can’t sleep, so I’m not waking up when I’m most productive. Waking later, so my morning is rushed and crazy. Oy. At least I have some direction now. That’s gotta mean something.